The River

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Where it marks the border of Riverclan, and where most of our clanmates to come and hunt fishes during the spring. The stepping stones are only reachable in the Late Spring and Early Summer.

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Subject: Re: The River Sat Sep 15, 2012 5:48 pm

Snowpaw looked at Silverheart as she spoke, "then maybe she can help me with my paw later!" he said excitedly. Then when Graystar asked if they had seen anything, he looked back at the river before answering, "not yet!"

Subject: Re: The River Sat Sep 15, 2012 5:50 pm

"Probably!" She yipped and smiled. She then stared at the river and snorted at the stentch.

Subject: Re: The River Sun Sep 16, 2012 11:44 pm

Graystar nodded as the others had said they hadn't noticed what was causing the river to look strange. The leader continued to trot forward at a rather fast pace, careful to make sure she wasn't too far ahead of the other wolves. She slowed to a stop as she noticed something strange in the distance, and turned to look at the other RiverClan wolves. "Does anyone notice something strange up over there?" The gray-furred leader asked those of her Clan.

[Anyone can choose what's wrong with the river]

Subject: Re: The River Tue Sep 18, 2012 5:40 pm

Magmafeather looked at the strange part of the river. He walked forward a bit, and then he saw something he had never seen before. A container of sorts had been flipped onto its side, and the remants of some purple liquid was still dripping into the river. Magmafeather could make out what looked like some sort of covering within the container, and the remanants of some weird looking meat. He walked closer, picking up the scent of a sick Moose and twolegs. He then went back to Graystar and told her what he had seen.

Subject: Re: The River Tue Sep 18, 2012 6:12 pm

Graystar listened as Magmafeather told her what he had seen in the river. "It must be something from Twolegs... we should all go closer to investigate what's happening. Be careful; there could be something dangerous up ahead." The leader said to the patrol, continuing forward slowly upstream. Graystar continued to glance at the river as she saw Twoleg items scattered here and there, and she wondered how they'd be able to fix the problem.

Subject: Re: The River Tue Sep 18, 2012 7:04 pm

She perked as Magmafeather explained what he saw up ahead. Nodding she trotted to their side and began walking to the edge of the river. Slowly wafting in the scent she snarled slightly in disgust. Staring at the rubbish spread around by the Twolegs.

Subject: Re: The River Thu Sep 20, 2012 4:29 pm

Snowpaw lifted his head and saw what Magmafeather had found, and crinkled his nose when smelling it. "What is that?" he asked, coming up to stand beside Graystar.

Subject: Re: The River Thu Sep 20, 2012 5:44 pm

Her breath was short as she limped down the river. Her open wounds seemed to make time slow, making her mind spin and twirl, as she closed her eyes and nearly fainted. The wolves that attacked her would pay, pay with their lives, if...she didn't lose her first. She had now wished that she never left the RiverClan terrtiory, to adventure. Because some thought it would be okay to attack a wolf like her. She coughed loudly as her mind couldn't take anymore.

Her front legs gave out and she landed hard on them, tumbling to the cold, hard ground. Her breath was slow and seemed powerless to keep her alive. Silktuft coughed, this time blood and saliva dripped out of her muzzle. She looked around for the alpha, not able to see her. Heck, she couldn't see no one of that matter! How could this of happened, being away so long. They might of forgot who she was.

She waited. To see if she was to fight another day....or face death in the eyes.

(I know lame. I haven't been on in...who knows! I'm going to say she went of to explore and she is now coming. Heh. Sorry)

Subject: Re: The River Thu Sep 20, 2012 6:36 pm

Graystar glanced at Snowpaw as the apprentice spoke. "I don't know what's in the river exactly, probably some Twoleg thing. Though why they'd put it in the river, I also don't know." The gray-furred wolf said to her apprentice, and she glanced upstream as she thought she could scent another wolf; similar to the scent of RiverClan. "Snowpaw, Silverheart, Magmafeather, and Foxheart; I'll be right back. If you'd be able to think of a way to fix this problem... please try to." Graystar said, and trotted upstream in the direction of the wolf she had scented. The leader couldn't tell if the wolf was of RiverClan, as the smell of the river was all she could scent clearly. Graystar continued upstream, wondering if the wolf was Silktuft as she sprinted forward.

Subject: Re: The River Thu Sep 20, 2012 8:24 pm

"Yes Graystar!" She dipped her head then nuzzled Snowpaw. Then beginning to try to claw out the strange trash of two legs. Yanking out a rough and nearly clear jug she jumped back. It held a rancid liquid and curdled milk. She pawed her nose then slowly began cleaning the trash out trying to clear it some what. "We need to slow the horrible acids from spilling!" She yelped through a mouthful of plastic. Then slowly picked the carcasses away and burying them on settle land.

Subject: Re: The River Fri Sep 21, 2012 2:39 am

Ripplepup snuck up to the steppingstones and sat down staring across the river, she saw big white stones on the other side of the river and frowned. that would be good territory for riverclan she thought, she stood and flicked her tail glaring across the river, blue eyes chilled like ice.

Subject: Re: The River Sat Sep 22, 2012 2:47 am

Snowpaw nodded, "ok Graystar," he said, then smiled when Silverheart nudged him. He watched as she pulled out the jug, he batted his nose with a paw and said, "ugh, twolegs are disgusting." He then began helping her pull things out of the river. He looked down the river, it looked endless, wherever you looked there was more twoleg rubbish. I sure hope we can put a stop to this, he thought, otherwise we might have to move out of the forest. He pushed the dreadful thought out of his head and continued picking rubbish out of the river.

Subject: Re: The River Sat Sep 22, 2012 8:35 pm

Ripplepup sighed and sat down, her eyes fixed on the white rocks on the other side of the river, she glanced up and watched greystar as well as a few others working on the river, her ears perked and she trotted down to the river and tilted her head, she turned and began making her way up the river towards a twoleg nest, her ears shoved up she snuck around the place and stopped noticing a big rubbish heap that stunk to high heaven, she growled noticin that it was close to the river and poisons from the rubbish were polluting the river, she turned and ran down stream to greystar barkin "greystar greystar i have found the problem to rivers stinkyness!' her eyes were keen and alert. filled with a desperatness to save her homeland

Subject: Re: The River Sat Sep 22, 2012 8:47 pm

She perked as she heard a pup's bark calling for Graystar. "What are you doing out of Camp?!" She growled padding up to the pup and giving it a hostile glare. But her gaze softened she knew that their curiousity was to tempting and they couldn't ignore all that was happening. "Well is this true?" She said strictly and trying to keep her tone smooth. Licking her bristled fur before she she could continue with her task.

Subject: Re: The River Sat Sep 22, 2012 8:55 pm

She nodded "yes yes yes! i went up to the twoleg place and i saw a big heap of um well stinky stuff! and it was right beside the river, and stuff kept on falling into the river as well as a liquid trail of stinky stuff!" she frowned her honeybrown eyes sparking with excitement. her white fur still rather fluffy with pup fur

Subject: Re: The River Sat Sep 22, 2012 9:04 pm

"Alright well you stay clear from it!" She ordered before turning to the others and explaining. "We must push this some place else or build a barrier between that heap and the river" she said trotting to where the pup had come from. Staring at the mess sneezing in disgust she watched as fluids leaked and bubbled into the water.

Subject: Re: The River Sat Sep 22, 2012 9:08 pm

Ripplepup blatantly ignored silverhearts command, she followed silverheart and sat down, she frowned then her eyes sparked suddenly with an idea "why dont we get big river stones and put them between the heap and the river then push on them to push the heap away without touching it?"

Subject: Re: The River Sat Sep 22, 2012 9:13 pm

"That would work!" She said glancing around in search for stones. "We need to gather large stones!" She said to the others nodding to Ripplepup before telling Graystar the plan and went to work.

Subject: Re: The River Sat Sep 22, 2012 9:15 pm

ripplepup frowned then said "there are big flat stones on the other side of the river and on the bottom of the river i noticed some big round stones, do you think that those could work?" she tilted her head, brown eyes sparkling.

Subject: Re: The River Sat Sep 22, 2012 9:34 pm

"We could always try!" She tried to sound positive about this. Sprinting to the river bank try to claw up some loose stones. Managing to get two free but the others were deeper in the spoiled water. She grunted as she peered over the river looking at the flat large stones.

Subject: Re: The River Sat Sep 22, 2012 11:04 pm

Graystar trotted back downstream; she would need to help Silktuft later. The leader trotted over to Silverheart and Ripplepup; arriving in time to hear Ripplepup's plan. "You left the camp without permission?" Graystar said to the pup. Sighing, she watched as Silverheart had managed to dig out a couple of stones. Graystar padded over to the edge of the river, trying to see if she could find anymore stones.

The silver-gray reflection of a rock caught the RiverClan wolf's attention, though it was rather deep in the polluted river. Graystar frowned, stepping slightly into the strange water of the river. It felt strange on her fur, though Graystar continued walking slowly through the river. Once she had reached the stone, the water coming up to about the height of her shoulders, Graystar tried clawing the stone free. The leader held her breath as she dived down under the water to try to free the stone; eventually succeeding. The gray-furred wolf coughed as she reappeared above the water, pushing the stone with her paws back towards the shore. "I've found one of the stones." The RiverClan wolf said as she climbed out of the river, shaking out her fur and moving the large stone out from underwater.

Subject: Re: The River Sat Sep 22, 2012 11:26 pm

Ripplepup watched graystar and tucked her tail under her in slight worry "im sorry graystar i just wanted to see sunningrocks then i went exploring and i found it im sorry!" she sighed and sat down "its just that theres nothing to do in camp and i wanted to see the territory"

Subject: Re: The River Sat Sep 22, 2012 11:58 pm

Graystar glanced at Ripplepup. The pup seemed a bit worried, and sorry that she'd left the camp. "Okay, Ripplepup. But you need to be more careful; you could have gotten lost, or ended up hurt. It also could be dangerous here." The gray-blue furred leader looked at the river before she looked back at Ripplepup. "You won't get in much trouble, just don't leave camp without permission; when you're an apprentice you'll get to explore even more of RiverClan's territory." Graystar padded along the shore, and after some time she managed to find another stone. Pushing it out of the sand with her muzzle, she pulled the stone back over to where the other RiverClan wolves were. "We've got four of these stones, do we need a few more?" Graystar asked, looking at Silverheart and Ripplepup.

Subject: Re: The River Sun Sep 23, 2012 12:30 am

Ripplepups ears perked, she nuzzled the stones around till they were blocking the liquid from flowing into the river "this should be enough" she chose a rock then began pushin with her paws on the stone, not making much progress but trying her best all the same.

Subject: Re: The River Sun Sep 23, 2012 1:29 am

She nodded "We can work with this!" She barked nudging a stone towards the heap and pushed. It began shifting slowly and cans toppled to the opposite side. Plucking a few more stones she began building the wall slowly pushing each one until the pile had was nearly a fox tail length from where it started.

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