Hawky and mossy training 0.o

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You may join in on the rp. As long its not a lot of drama 0.o.

I've just found out you need 45 points in 2 skills. And 60 in one skill
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Hunting Large Animals:8

Hunting Medium-Sized Animals:5

Hunting Small Animals:17

Fishing:0 (Maybe I'll add this in 0.o)

Finding Prey:4

Finding Herbs:0

Scouting for Predators:0

Offensive Fighting:17

Defensive Fighting:0

Problem Solving:0
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Padding into the training area,she glanced around. She then beckoned mossy to join her. "Sit down. Now,what do you want to learn first?" She chuckled. "There is so much to choose from."

(O shot forgot to switch to my acc)
I jump onto Hawk. I then ask,"Like this." I then slide my claws out. I jump off of hawk turn and pounce on a mouse killing it.

Seeing Mossy pounce on a mouse she nodded and smiled. "Nice job. You've done well Mossypaw. You've done well." She looked down at the apprentice.

"I am so excited to become a warrior but I will miss you." I tell her. I then turn and sit next to her. I suddenly brake down and cry. I couldn't control my feelings.

Nodding,she went under her chin and lip gated her up. She then faced her with a warm orange eye. "Its ok,you should be proud." She back away and gave a nod to Mossypaw. "I have trained you well. And you have been a wonderful apprentice. I now say she is qualified to be a warrior."

"Really,"I ask. I then turn to her and say,"I am going to have a pup when I am older and name it Hawkpup after you its warrior name shall be Hawkeye." I then sit down next to hawk, and think about the pup.

She smiled. Then licked her ear. "I am honored Mossypaw." She then nodded to her. "I hope your life is enjoyable. And full os spirit. And let Starclan guide you path."

Mosseybreeze wrote:

"Really,"I ask. I then turn to her and say,"I am going to have a pup when I am older and name it Hawkpup after you its warrior name shall be Hawkeye." I then sit down next to hawk, and think about the pup.

Please post 4 sentences Mossey, thanks.

(Shadow that is four.)

(It's three:
1. "Really,"I ask.

2. I then turn to her and say,"I am going to have a pup when I am older and name it Hawkpup after you its warrior name shall be Hawkeye."

3. I then sit down next to hawk, and think about the pup.)

(Ok thank you for telling me I thought I had written 4 I am sorry Shadow.)

(It's fine, what I do to help, is count the periods/exclamation points before you post. IF you have at least 4, then your good. If not, add a sentence or two )

(Got it now thank you! )

I geuss it is time to lock this.

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