(Nah it's alrighty)
Bluepaw~
Blue ears lowered as she listened to her mentor. She was scolded not because she didn't catch the prey, it was because she played instead of hunting. The blue fae looked down at her paws feeling guilty. Whitestorm was right. This was not a game, and even though she prefered playing, the young apprentice had to do her duties else her clan will be starving. She had another chanse so she got up and followed her mentor. This time she was willing to show herself, but not with one little hare. Bluepaw was planning to hunt a deer.