SunClan Camp

Ripplestar said "they should have told the other clans that they had found him, how would you have liked it fernshade if they had found thistlepup but not given him back?" her fur bristled along her spine. her blue eyes glittered. everyone seemed to like amberwing better and listened to her as if she was a leader. Ripplestar sunk her claws into the earth. it wasnt fair.

Scarletpaw padded back into camp. She sat just outside of the apprentices den listening to the conversation that was taking place about attacking ThunderClan. She desperately wanted to take part in it but wasn't sure if Ripplestar would let her. She could understand how Ripple felt but Scarlet couldn't help thinking that Otter may want to stay in ThunderClan. That'll break Ripplestar's heart..., she thought and shook herself. Standing up, she padded closer to the group of wolves to try get noticed and be picked for the raid.

Scarletpaw perked her ears hearing her name being called. Spotting Amberwing she padded over to the SunClan deputy and dipped her head respectfully. She waited and wondered what she was going to say. She hoped she'd allow her to join the ThunderClan raid.

"Thunderfang." She answered before adding, " He's in the medicine wolf den with Tigerfern because we got attacked by a bear..." She trailed off and cast a glance over at the medicine wolf den to see if she could spot them. She'd already proved she could fight when the bear had attacked, she couldn't see a reason why she couldn't fight now. The wound on her head had stopped bleeding and she was as strong as ever.

Tigerfern awoke and walked out of the medicine den and growled "thunderfang is not partisipating in any useless battles!" she glared at them angrily. her brown and cream fur all fluffed up. she said "ripplestar it is not fair to take otterpaw back! so if Firestar has pups take one of them as pennance!" she then walked back into the medicine den curling up around her mate.

Scarletpaw was about to protest about the fact she was the only apprentice being told to do this but bit her tongue thinking better of it. "Do you want me to attack you?" She asked confused. She wasn't sure if Amberwing meant a quick, friendly combat or just show her the moves she knew. Scarlet perked her ears at the sound of Tigerfern's voice and smiled seeing the warrior was okay.

Scarletpaw twitched her ears confused at Amber's tone. "We all have our own opinions you know." She reasoned pointedly and flicked her tail. "Not everyone always agrees..." She added more quietly and cast a glance around camp.

Scarletpaw flattened her ears trying to control herself. "When in that sentence did I say that I agreed with her? Stealing pups from ANYONE is wrong! All I was saying is that we have our different views on the subject." Scarlet replied blandly. Her gaze was fixed on Amberwing almost daring the female to challenge her.

Scarletpaw gave a small nod of appreciation at the female's words. She watched Amberwing circling her and she figured that this might be a test to see her skills. "If I was given the choice I'd be part of the raid." She admitted whilst keeping an eye on Amerwing's movements. "But I'll do whatever Ripplestar's tells me to do." She finished whilst squaring her shoulders defensively and stalking around to make sure Amberwing was always in front of her.

Scarletpaw twitched her tail confused as to why Ripple wasn't coming. But before she had time to think about it, Amberwing had made her first attack, aiming at Scarlet's flank. As quick as a flash, she instinctively dropped to the floor and rolled away out of reach of Amberwing's paws and sprung up to her feet. She'd felt Amber's paw scrape through her fur and realised that if she'd been a heartbeat slower, the deputy would've hit her. Raising an eyebrow cheekily, she let out a growl and lashed her tail feeling the thrill of the test. "Come on, then." She taunted, ready for Amber's next attack. She couldn't see why she was the only apprentice doing this and Scarlet felt a stab of hurt that her own clan deputy didn't think she could fight.

Amberwing wrote:

"Scarletpaw come here please." Amberwing called as she spotted the apprentice arriving in camp.

Four sentences please, Amber!
Also please try not to power play when fighting, you must say that your character tried to clip her leg, not actually cliped it, so that your opponent can decide wether it comes into contact or not

((Sorry Heatherstar I will.fix it now))

(Sorry late post)


"Ripple Fire is my sister I know her. She would never take a pup! Falcon was wrong to keep him yes but still Otter wants to stay!" He stood by what Fern had said. "They would never be like Shadow clan and steal pups. Ebony stay out of this! How about you fight! If you die your pups will go hungry. Breakdown just had my sons and daughters. If I die because of this I am blaming Ripple." He ran over to his mate. He nudged her. "If I don't come back tell them about me."

Ebonyfur glared at Swiftstorm. "Hey mousebrain, get updated. My pups are already old enough to chew."she said. The fae glared at Swiftstorm. "Dimwitted furball."she muttered.

"Well they don't have a dad! I want my pups to have a dad at least! My breakdown will hav soem one with her to take care of them! She will not end up like you!" He growled at Ebony. She was really starting to get on his nerves.

"Yeah. Take your anger out on me, a poor little widow."she said in a calm tone to the foolish wolf. She glared without a hint of violence. "And would it be my fault that Breakdown would not have a mate? No. It would be your fault for not being strong enough to survive."she said. The fae smiled to herself in a sly way.

He took a deep breath. He was still grieving his sister. "You know how you said you hate impure wolves? Well I am full Thunderclan. But I never knew that. Otter dosen't remember barley anything. Just leave him alone."


Mosspup ran into camp. She walked over to nightpup. "What did I miss." SHe sat down